With his mind alone, Command levitates a pen and paper off the nearby desk, and writes on it, "So did today's training suck or what?"
Conquer simply speaks! "It was particularly brutal today, with all the jabs and exercises."
They turn to Control and ask him, "So how do you think today was?"
And Control looks up and says, "Ruff."
Joke Poo: The Finance Meeting
Three hedge fund managers – BuyLow, SellHigh, and HedgeFund – are sitting in the executive boardroom after a grueling day of negotiations.
BuyLow, using only his mind, telekinetically pulls a platinum fountain pen and a notepad off the mahogany desk and scrawls, "So, did that leveraged buyout almost bankrupt us, or what?"
SellHigh simply speaks, "It was particularly brutal today, with all the hostile takeovers and short squeezes."
They both turn to HedgeFund and ask, "So how do you think today was?"
And HedgeFund looks up from his spreadsheets and says, "Rough."
Alright, let’s break down this canine comedy and see what we can unearth!
Analysis of the Original Joke:
- Premise: Three unusually intelligent dogs with militaristic names ("Command," "Conquer," "Control") are subjected to laboratory testing.
- Setup: Two dogs exhibit extraordinary abilities: telekinesis (Command) and articulate speech (Conquer). This builds an expectation of comparable, perhaps even more impressive, powers from Control.
- Punchline: Control simply makes a dog pun ("Ruff"). The humor comes from the unexpected, underwhelming reveal. It’s a classic subversion of expectation. The high level of anthropomorphism built up gets deflated by a simple dog-like response.
- Humor Type: Wordplay, subversion of expectation, anthropomorphism.
Key Elements:
- Dog Names: The militaristic, ambitious names "Command," "Conquer," and "Control."
- Laboratory Testing: Implies scientific experimentation and potentially advanced capabilities.
- Subverted Expectation: The build-up of intelligence and special abilities culminating in a mundane "Ruff."
- Wordplay/Pun: The use of "Ruff" as a double entendre.
Comedic Enrichment: New Joke/Observation
Option 1: Expanding on the Names and Training
"It’s funny," the lab technician mused, stroking Command. "We named him Command hoping he’d command attention. Conquer, well, we thought he’d conquer any challenge we threw at him. But Control? We just hoped he’d control his bladder in the lab. Turns out, he’s still the most reliable at that training."
Why it works:
- Connects the names directly to the dog’s expected, but not achieved, abilities.
- Adds a layer of relatable dog behavior (potty training) that is relatable
- Plays on the irony of their intended capabilities and the reality of dog ownership.
Option 2: Playing with Scientific Explanation (A "Did You Know" Parody)
Did you know? Scientists believe the "Ruff" response in Control, despite his advanced cognitive abilities demonstrated in the lab, is a fascinating example of linguistic regression in canines. Apparently, even dogs who can understand complex commands still retain a primal urge to communicate with the simplest, most instinctual vocalization: a bark disguised as a pun. Funding for this research has, unsurprisingly, been cut.
Why it works:
- Parodies the often-absurd nature of scientific explanations for mundane occurrences.
- Ups the ante of the lab, as if dogs being that smart is possible, and their behaviour can be explained by scientific observation.
- Capitalizes on the absurdity of researchers seriously studying something so trivial, with the funding joke as a cynical punctuation mark.
Option 3: A Meta-Joke
"So," the other researchers asked the lead scientist, "We’ve given them militaristic names, subjected them to extensive experimentation, even granted them the power of speech and telekinesis. What’s the joke here, Dr. Peterson?"
Dr. Peterson sighed. "It’s about the subversion of expectation, Bob! About building anticipation and then delivering a punchline so utterly lame that it wraps back around to being funny! Like… ‘What does a dog say when he gets put back in his kennel?’"
Bob stared blankly.
Dr. Peterson groaned. "Ruff."
Why it works:
- Acknowledges the structure of the original joke directly.
- Pokes fun at the art of joke analysis (meta-humor).
- The joke ends with the same punchline, but now as part of a larger, self-aware comedic frame.
These options each try to extend the humor of the original joke by using details from it. These details of dogs, laboratories, and intelligence are used to amplify the humour.